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there's a lump in my throat
that i just can't swallow and
tears in my eyes that
won't blink away.

lose the smile, you told me--
it never looked good on you anyway.

[the subconscious is such a
broken, fragile thing]
Just some ramblings. Word vomit.
Something yet nothing.

I don't know.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner May 28, 2013   General Artist
poignant and piercing and so very pretty :heart:
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
poignant is one of my favorite words!

Thank you dearest. <3
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013   General Artist
also the perfect word to describe your pretty words :heart:

you are so very welcome, sweetest :tighthug:
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're too kind okay <3
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013   General Artist
so are you! <3 <3 <3
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hypermagical Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
Lovely
lines falling like
raindrops
only these make the words
taste as sweet as the air.

:heart:
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
CUTEST COMMENT AWARD OKAY
YOU WIN IT

thank you kindly darling. <3
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hypermagical Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
:XD: I try, lol.
You're so welcome! :iconholdheartplz:
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SebastianGrimm Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
People who do not smile often are those with a wonderful smile. This piece is excellent!
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(': That might be true!

Thank you kindly babe!
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SebastianGrimm Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure dear!
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the-solimnludic Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Don't be afraid to smile!

I like the ending line most, especially how it used your username, that was cool!
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. C:

And bah! Someone noticed. 8D
Thanks! I'm really glad. C:
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the-solimnludic Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Haha, yeah!! You're welcome! (:
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