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Daily Deviation
August 24, 2015
she aches by brokenfragilethings weaves a beautifully poetic piece that uses repetition and religious symbolism magnificently.
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I love the marks that a woman’s clothes leave on her body. I love the red indents and the proof of a long day before she even opens her mouth.
Tight socks circumventing ankle bones. A watch cutting a bit too tightly around a pulse. The alluringly simple bra straps; wire pressing up into the impossibly soft undersides of breasts; the cryptic clasp nestled between shoulder blades. The imprint of lace and elastic on the taut tender tendon of the inner thigh. The geography of jeans around the hips and trailing along the legs like railroad tracks. The line on her cheek from when she fell asleep on the bus home.
I love the luxurious sigh wh
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tutorial
take an evening -
reclassify emotions as chemical compounds.
remove one atom,
see what changes.
take your field notes, transcribe them
back to front.
add line breaks.
be scientific. be too scientific.
replace the word 'entropy'
with the word 'god'.
be so full of want that you can feel it
scraping its numb jaws against your insides.
write about flowers instead.
make your first line provocative.
follow it, let it unfurl -
ctrl a.
del.
inauthentic, try again.
ctrl z.
who the fuck
wants authenticity
?
read, find inspiration.
find new ways to plagiarize old ideas.
stop reading.
hash and rehash,
slash and burn.
look at the mess you've mad
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vlog of the bodily apocalypse
and this: the bone of the wind. the tiny little god that you squirreled away into your throat when no one was looking. you, an artist, not better than anyone else because of it, with thorns in your sides. aren't those the ones you were given for christmas? i thought they looked familiar. i thought this mountain looked a lot like the back yard. if you don't share this poem then a dead girl will appear in your bathroom tonight. you should make friends with her. you should tell her your name. you should tell her that you know the wind is going numb and boneless and you know, you know that the curve of yourself is a real thing, but you're scared.
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not sure if this could be considered ideologically sensitive, but i'm checking it just in case.
feel free to let me know if it isn't. the same goes for if the sexual themes are too mild, or vice versa.
feel free to let me know if it isn't. the same goes for if the sexual themes are too mild, or vice versa.
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This is one of the most beautiful and personally erotic pieces of literature I have ever had the pleasure to read. If you ever decide to write a book, please inform me. xoxo