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Daily Deviation

Given 2014-06-06
twenty by brokenfragilethings gently reminds us why we must hold onto our angels; because the world would be a very frightening, cruel place, otherwise.  It resonates strongly in so few words -- leaving an everlasting mark. ( Suggested by LadyLincoln and Featured by inknalcohol )
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lethologic-luna Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh I am getting shivers--
--yesyesyes I loved this piece, now I remember it!
Ohmygoodness, look at you!! :heart: You totally deserved this DD!!!!! I'm so happy for you <333
Now I only wish I'd thought to suggest it, haha. Congratulations, my dearest :')
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WEEPS NAH, THANK YOU SO MUCH

this was honestly a two am, woke up delirious with a pen in hand, kind of  a thing
and i dont think it was worthy but, i appreciate it nonetheless! so greatly.

I LOVE YOU THANK YOU<3
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
because we killed the angels so it is our fault XD
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transparent-soul Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Is there a meaning to the shape of the words?
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4maya Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist
Probably    to
make   it    all
square  -  like

:shrug:
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WiegerKeulen Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woo so sort and so emotional.Clap 
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Tarzok Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
:clap::clap::clap:
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animegirlcorycian Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, so true
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
Makes me think of the George Carlin quote, "... did you ever stop to think about the people we kill? It's always those who tell us to live together in harmony and try to love one another. Jesus, Gandhi, Lincoln, John Kennedy, Bobby Kennedy, Malcolm X, John Lennon. They all said live together in harmony... BAM! Right in the head. Apparently we aren't ready for that yet." We destory everything good, everything gentle, everything meaningful, and so we're left with shit.

Lovely little poem. Congrats on the DD.
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's kinda strange to see the two poets that I really look up to in the same place on DA... Almost surreal...
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
D'aww! :hug:
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Huggle! 
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's exactly what I meant with this, in a sense.
We lose the good things because we ourselves get rid of them.

Thank you so much! I appreciate it. <3
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
That's definitely true. 

You're very welcome! :D 
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MsGeekNerd Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's kinda strange to see the two poets that I really look up to in the same place on DA... Almost surreal... Congrats on the well deserved DD
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lowezzy Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Like... Nod
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you (:
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RadiantGloom Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student General Artist
This is so beautiful. Congratulations on the Daily Deviation, you deserved it
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so floored by your words. Thank you so much!
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RadiantGloom Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student General Artist
You're welcome :D
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Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   General Artist
:wow: :heart: :clap:
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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kir-dreamer Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student
Wow. It's so simply but so powerful! 
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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carmencaracol Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
beautifulHeart 
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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carrollbriggs Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
Such a truthful statement...
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
sadly. Thank you!
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carrollbriggs Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
Thou art welcome. :)
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Hagleh Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
:iconseizurekittyplz:
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Kagamiaoi Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Writer
Truly amazing that you can capture a profound message in a small quantity of words, Daily deviation award is well deserved congrats :3 
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm honored. 

Thank you so much!
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Kagamiaoi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome, and really that was wonderful :3
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The-Teacup-Doodler Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my angel is Pell. I'll try to never let him die.
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's lovely. I wish you luck.
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The-Teacup-Doodler Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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luvin-muzic Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
This is so true... Congrats for the Daily Deviation spot! XD
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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luvin-muzic Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
No problem! :)
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delta7Xx Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
i hold my angel close... ill never let her perish.
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad. Please do that. (:
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delta7Xx Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
and when you find yours, do the same. life isnt worth living without whoever it is.
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inkuu Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
your such a kind person i always see your encouraging comments ;o;
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delta7Xx Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
aww, thanks :hug:
and you're an amazing artist ^^
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hikaruasakura Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
few words that describes a sad truth.
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
truths are usually sad, i've learned.
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AcrossDimensions Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The DD is well deserved! What an amazing idea and theme!
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! I appreciate it.
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're so lovely! I appreciate this. Thank you so much.
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