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i feel bare, he said,
pressed leaves to his branches
and prayed the world would just
look away.
pressed leaves to his branches
and prayed the world would just
look away.
Literature
butterflied
it is a snake
coiled in my stomach,
the urge to vomit
everything inside of me, to purge
all the toxic not-
good-enoughs. to retell
the same story and expect
a different ending is
the dysfunction that landed
us in here. I'm sorry
I don't follow you into
your dreams at night. I'm sorry
my smile is not the moon,
I'm sorry I did anything
to make you notice
me at all. no finger
down the throat could ever
take that
away.
Literature
winter.
she doesn't see him.
a lone wolf girl,
with jagged shards of moonlight in her eyes,
she's pieced together with frozen
inhales-
and him, he has a black/hole/heart.
he can already see her fade
away from him,
without even a touch,
into the harsh winter wind
bared shoulders, snow skin
a fearless storm of a goddess-
"No," she said, still looking up at the sky. "i am brave because i am afraid."
Literature
flutterhands
You’re lonely—
your arms clasped behind you
in a figure four, flutterhands flit
to tuck the loose strand of hair back
then to pinch the stem of an empty glass
you sip it anyways reapply crimson
smooth dress check phone no texts
type one out, delete it all later.
You know,
I would talk to you
if you didn’t look
so busy.
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you are stripping us naked.
i'm trying to keep myself together.
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changed "prayed the world just looked away" to "prayed the world would just look away"
better? worse? it's a little thing but?
i'm trying to keep myself together.
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changed "prayed the world just looked away" to "prayed the world would just look away"
better? worse? it's a little thing but?
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This is beautiful, winter is one of my favourite subjects to write about. (And trees too, though none of my tree pieces are posted here.) I do agree with the other comments, I prefer it without the "would". There seems to be more depth behind it that way, it allows a little more flexibility to the reader's comprehension. (Just my opinion, it works well either way.)